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Arthur Centino ([personal profile] xp_longshot) wrote in [personal profile] xp_daytripper 2024-01-16 01:57 pm (UTC)

"Well, once you have made a plan, let me know if I can help with the atmosphere. New York so owes me right now, I could probably get you a full fireworks show when you do the kissing thing."

"Calm down, 7th and 42nd."


Excellent to see this side of Amanda and Kane after so many heavier logs in the aftermath.

The little details were great here — Amanda closing the distance between her and Kane as the conversation lightened, Kane's little actions (like the water bottle) that weren't merely reactions to the conversation. They made everything very easy to picture.

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